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ನಾನಲ್ಲೇ ನಿಂತಿದ್ದೆ......
ಇಂದು ತಿರುಗಿ ಬಾರದಷ್ಟು ದೂರ ಸಾಗಿದ್ದೇವೆ ಇಬ್ಬರೂ...
ಆಗಾಗ ನೆನಪುಗಳು ಕಾಡುವುದಂತೂ ಸುಳ್ಳಲ್ಲ!!
ಈಗಲೂ ನಿನ್ನ ಆ ನೂರಾರು ಪ್ರಶ್ನೆಗಳಿಗೆ
ನನ್ನದು ಒಂದೇ ಒಂದು ಮೌನದ ಉತ್ತರ..
ಕಣ್ಣಲ್ಲೀಗ ನಿನಗಾಗಿ ಒಂದು ಹನಿ ನೀರಿಲ್ಲ
ಬರೀ ನಿಟ್ಟುಸಿರು ನೆನಪುಗಳು ಕಾಡಿದಾಗ
ಆದರೂ ಕೂಗಿ ಕೂಗಿ ಹೇಳಬೇಕೆನಿಸುವುದು ಒಂದೇ ಒಂದು ಮಾತು
ಅಂದು ನೀನೊಮ್ಮೆ ಹಿಂತಿರುಗಿ ನೋಡಬೇಕಿತ್ತು
ನಾನಲ್ಲೇ ನಿಂತಿದ್ದೆ.......
23 comments:
cholo iddu..adre eno kammi anstu
It's an incomplete poem... every time when i read this i feel so... but i felt i could write only this much....
Thanks for the comment
nice poem :) we all go thru such phases in life i guess
@ enigma
Ya thatis true....
Thanx....
papa... :(
he should have turned back....
i liked it very much....
en madadu...It shows he never understood her... or never tried to understand her feelings...
or he loved her so much that he got scared to look back which cud make his heart weak and forced him to come back to her... then his works wud remain incomplete... she had seen only his back if she had seen his eyes she wud come to know.....
Wonderful adi... May be that is true.. but what if she is still standing where he had left her and waitng for him to come back....or one more thing can also happen... just read this shayari it explains that
"Mat karwao intezar hume itna, ki waqt k faisle pe afsos ho jaye. kya pata kal tum laut ke phir aao, aur hum humesha k liye khamosh ho jaye!"
in that case i hate that "WAQT"...
but how will he come to know she s still waitin... when a man goes to win the world he'l never look back.. but the sad part is after his victory when he look back no body 'll be der for him...
v can say only WAQT s resposible for this... :(
ya.. that is all we can say.. now it's left to him and her right?? ;-)
ok.. lets not interfere too much in their personal matter...... :)
nangu tumba ishta aythu..
nice one..
thanks sunil
this one is too gud . even it seems to be incomplete it says many things which is not written
Thanks Rash.... If not u who else could write such a nice comment.... This comment section was only incomplete till now .. but now it is complete :-) thanks a lot
do u want me to continue with my words again
It's ur wish
"""what if she is still standing where he had left her and waitng for him to come back""" i felt she is still there..
as u said time cud make all da differnce..she may be waitin still....but the feelin wud hav been faded down the line
To sandeep..
wt i feel is "its never called as FEELINGS that will shrink as the time fades.."
i think she s not a kind of gal whose " feelin will fade down the line"
v'll ask shyamu wt she says abt that gal...
hai shyaama,
nimma i saalugalu nanna hrudaya thakidavu.
naanu nimma blog odi nimma abhimaani agidini. i want to know more abt u.
thanks ranju.... ನನ್ನ ಮನಸ್ಸಿನ ಅಂಗಳಕ್ಕೆ ಹೊಸ ಸ್ನೇಹಿತರಿಗೆ always welcome... mail madi nange shyamas@gmail.com
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